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Invisible Girls
Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 7:03 pm
by Lorna
Unseen,
Unknown,
Unrecognized,
Faceless.
Trapped within anonymity
she longs for an identity.
Her own "place" in the world
Seeming so far out of reach.
A stone without a splash,
A tree without a shadow,
A vampire without a reflection,
Can you see her?
Will you see her?
© 2003
Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 7:32 pm
by Rebecca
Hi Lorna (again)
Iv'e just come up a bit from the jokey page, that is quite a poem, I really like it. Sometimes things seem way out of reach, and yet you can feel them right up close, at least for me , that's how things often are, like wanting to touch a butterfly. It will die when touched, yet it's the beauty that drives me to keep going
I must go to bed soon, it's half 1 over here in England, and I haven't had much sleep recently
Love
Rebecca xxx

SHARING * ARE THESE YOUR REFLECTIONS LORNA ???
Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 7:36 pm
by Marda
I'll See Your
*INVISIBLE GIRLS*
and raise you a
*LITTLE WING*
x Jimi Hendrix @ Axis Bold As Love
***
Recommended Dosage
*READ*
*LORNA* while
*HEARING*
*JIMI*
*PLAY*
***
*TAKE* as
*REQUIRED* to
*2*
*RELIEVE*
*PAIN*
***
Love / Marda
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:29 pm
by Jassmine(SO)
Hey Lorna,
WOW!! Most excellent poem!
*Hugs*

Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:57 pm
by Gelinda
There must be something in the water or air or maybe the cpu lines
That was beautiful Lorna
You seem like me. I have not written Poetic verse in a hundred years or more.
Now to have done two in two days something is up
What about you?????????????/
Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 9:25 pm
by CJ
Hi all,
Great poem, Lorna!

Very universal--it can apply to any person out there in this big wide world... and that's a
good thing! Now, you obviously know you share at least
that particular longing with those around you.
Thanks for sharing!

I'm of a mind to revisit my old poems, somewhere else in this section. Might give me inspiration to write more. I love it when the gals, here, let loose their creative side.
Love,
CJ
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2004 4:13 am
by SophieLawson
Cool poem, makes me wanna go start writing poems
Sophie xx
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2004 3:58 pm
by Rebecca
Why not give it a whirl, Sophie
Love
Rebecca xxx
